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Lost Ring Jan 1987

Curse that stone just lying there,
I remember how it made you glare.  
Your friends and foes thought it unfair,  
When you displayed to them your newest wear.  
But as the days grew up and became a year,  
You showed me how you didn’t care ,  
As sharp and clean as that stone,    
you cut and disfigured a love that had grown,  
For such a wealthy expression of love to be,  
Now its worth is only a million tears in the sea.
Written by LennyBlue
Published | Edited 15th May 2019
Author's Note
My fiancee left my engagement ring on the front door with a note.
This poem is the pain I felt then.
( I’m actually lucky...7 affairs in 7 years she had )
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