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Did Some Fool Say "Eat Shit and Die"?
How js it (?) or how can it be that
the odors (aromas?) of
human vomitus,
human shit,
produce in their producers
the gag, the heave, the puke,
( that one was their gastronomic
delight ? )
Not to mention the sight of our entrails.
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2019dankozak2019dkzk
Published 29th Apr 2019
Author's Note
This THEMES shit is so bad....needs to be greatly expanded, eliminated, or at very least, made optional.
And we must be rid of that dopey, retarded-, juvenile worm mascot. Tis embarrassing.
And we must be rid of that dopey, retarded-, juvenile worm mascot. Tis embarrassing.
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Anonymous
29th Apr 2019 6:19pm
Now, now, sir DanielX ... even in poetry
we need mag`scots [ maggot mascots ]
or else how else would I po`etry be
cheered upon?
You`re observations do not fail to provoke
or inspire ... enjoyed this one
immensely - ~Devlin
Do I detect contention, dissension, not to mention frustration and degradation. Maybe not, could just be my dementiasion.
gotta rid myself of this rhyming monkey.
gotta rid myself of this rhyming monkey.
29th Apr 2019 10:59pm
I'm with you on the themes
and the worm, a poem's theme
already exists (or not)
within the poem, and the worm
is just silly ..
and the worm, a poem's theme
already exists (or not)
within the poem, and the worm
is just silly ..
