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Breathless Views
Morning breaks her trance
and here I stand, in front of you
in awe, in anticipation
waiting, watching
the dawn, the eruption
the sparkle in those eyes dancing
daylight rises, the roses bloom
the scent of honeysuckle drips off your smile
still, so still, my heart plays
the perfect melody, for two
as we tangle and tango
throughout the afternoon
the stars sit patiently
out on back
waiting for their moment to shine
to sparkle in your eye
but they won't get their chance
as tonight the only breathless view
will be of me, watching you
and here I stand, in front of you
in awe, in anticipation
waiting, watching
the dawn, the eruption
the sparkle in those eyes dancing
daylight rises, the roses bloom
the scent of honeysuckle drips off your smile
still, so still, my heart plays
the perfect melody, for two
as we tangle and tango
throughout the afternoon
the stars sit patiently
out on back
waiting for their moment to shine
to sparkle in your eye
but they won't get their chance
as tonight the only breathless view
will be of me, watching you
Published 28th Apr 2019
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28th Apr 2019 2:56pm
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28th Apr 2019 7:22pm
Was that you standing at the foot of my bed this morning?
Lol, great ink Squirrel!!
-M
Lol, great ink Squirrel!!
-M
28th Apr 2019 7:23pm
28th Apr 2019 5:16pm
28th Apr 2019 7:24pm
Thank you big T, I can't wait to see what inspires me as it gets hotter up here.
Anonymous
28th Apr 2019 5:59pm
ooh ... chills
~Devlin
28th Apr 2019 7:25pm
28th Apr 2019 11:48pm
I'm marking this down as your best ink Tim...absolutely beautiful my friend.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
29th Apr 2019 00:58am
Anonymous
29th Apr 2019 4:44pm
Those last lines...damn...you brought a small gasp of "oh wow" to my lips...beautiful, truly
29th Apr 2019 4:46pm
