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LIVING ON A THIN LINE

Excuse me but may I have a moment of your time in mind and soul and heart for have you ever lived through and been within a situation that had you just living on a thin line, for i'm just gonna leave this here within the deepness of your depth of your mind to ponder and wonder that very inner silent thought. For I am rapping about feeling trap in a relationship in general were you felt you were trap in a world of really no return, but yet you try to hold it together just because of your deep love even though you feel in your heart and soul and gut you are doing it all alone trying to hold it all together. For even though you get no honor truth nor trust in return not even commitment as you deserve better for your life and world for there isn't no appreciation for your effort to support there needs and wants, for your only reward is only to feel unwanted and not feel unconditional love and affection with an unconditional kind of real love from the heart mind and spiritual soul for bottom line we sometimes miss our blessings by just us being blind to what is before our very eyes.
Written by Stoney223 (WOLF BAY33)
Published | Edited 28th Apr 2019
Author's Note
just something to think about in your mind
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