deepundergroundpoetry.com
living in the trenches ...
delving into the mind is an archeological
dig, and whatever one brings to the surface
inevitably requires interpretation,
whereupon the whole excavation collapses..
Published 23rd Apr 2019
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23rd Apr 2019 11:55pm
Almost sounds like when meeting someone for the first time. That is one way I interpret your poem. Overall real good write.
24th Apr 2019 00:54am
In light of your dream
I see what you mean
you examine your find... and your mind...which is
perfectly happy not knowing...
rebels...and tears down the walls...before
it can become enlightened...
Thanks, Dart, for the illuminating read... Ely
I see what you mean
you examine your find... and your mind...which is
perfectly happy not knowing...
rebels...and tears down the walls...before
it can become enlightened...
Thanks, Dart, for the illuminating read... Ely
thanks Ely, although I'm afraid
I see no enlightenment, as the
roof caves in ..
I see no enlightenment, as the
roof caves in ..
24th Apr 2019 8:02pm
