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Breath Of Need
To the intoxication of our spirits
Piece by piece
Our hiding places were found
So delicately beautiful
We gave ourselves tenderly
To the hunger of want
The heartbeat of longing
The breath of need
Our beings in sweet oblivion
Nothing but us
Inhaling our scent
Tasting our essence
Feeling our hearts race
Exploding our souls
In the eye of the storm
Piece by piece
Our hiding places were found
So delicately beautiful
We gave ourselves tenderly
To the hunger of want
The heartbeat of longing
The breath of need
Our beings in sweet oblivion
Nothing but us
Inhaling our scent
Tasting our essence
Feeling our hearts race
Exploding our souls
In the eye of the storm
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Re. Breath Of Need
21st Apr 2019 11:59pm
To the hunger of want
The heartbeat of longing
The breath of need
Our beings in sweet oblivion
Nothing but us
I love these stanzas here, it speaks to the heart and kisses the mind... 'the breath of need' totally memorizing my love
The heartbeat of longing
The breath of need
Our beings in sweet oblivion
Nothing but us
I love these stanzas here, it speaks to the heart and kisses the mind... 'the breath of need' totally memorizing my love
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Re: Re. Breath Of Need
22nd Apr 2019 00:03am
Well thank you for appreciating my scribble , since you are the Queen Of erotica it certainly means a lot when you like it .
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22nd Apr 2019 00:05am
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Re. Breath Of Need
22nd Apr 2019 2:49am
Sigh are you so good with words! I love this one...
" To the hunger of want
The heartbeat of longing
The breath of need "
" To the hunger of want
The heartbeat of longing
The breath of need "
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24th Apr 2019 9:09am
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22nd Apr 2019 5:07am
You would say that my numero uno fan, Hell yeah it’s good about time the likes were more lol
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