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Cosmos
I'm lost
Whenever I look
In those hypnotic
Cosmos colored eyes.
You...
Who makes me feel
Like wanton
On a hot boiling water.
Like an ice cream
Under the sun
Just exactly what you do to me
And my entire skeletal system melts, faster than a spinning bullet.
Now I'm under your spell
Dear, oh dear, oh dear
It's you
Who can undone.
Those raspy, husky voice
That echoes
Through my...
Veins.
Whenever I look
In those hypnotic
Cosmos colored eyes.
You...
Who makes me feel
Like wanton
On a hot boiling water.
Like an ice cream
Under the sun
Just exactly what you do to me
And my entire skeletal system melts, faster than a spinning bullet.
Now I'm under your spell
Dear, oh dear, oh dear
It's you
Who can undone.
Those raspy, husky voice
That echoes
Through my...
Veins.
Published 10th Apr 2019
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19th Apr 2019 5:10pm
Your use of similes to describe the feel is wonderful
and adds a nice image to the feelings throughout this spill
and adds a nice image to the feelings throughout this spill
19th Apr 2019 5:13pm
