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To Be Part Of Your Breath
What longing
Lies deep
In this sad beating heart
This excluded lover
Beautifully wishes
To be part of your breath
To surrender this beaten soul
Rise in the aura of your beauty
Becoming a flower again
My tongue has so many words
Yet to be spoken
All you need do is look in these eyes
The feverish heat of love
Will not cool even for a second
Your effect is that strong
This beautiful ache goes on
It’s a sweet agony
Because I love you
So I spill this on a page
Where everyone will know
Except you
Lies deep
In this sad beating heart
This excluded lover
Beautifully wishes
To be part of your breath
To surrender this beaten soul
Rise in the aura of your beauty
Becoming a flower again
My tongue has so many words
Yet to be spoken
All you need do is look in these eyes
The feverish heat of love
Will not cool even for a second
Your effect is that strong
This beautiful ache goes on
It’s a sweet agony
Because I love you
So I spill this on a page
Where everyone will know
Except you
Published 8th Apr 2019
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8th Apr 2019 12:15pm
i like how it flows and tells a story of absence of a burning love that reaches into the depth of the mind and soul also i like format of the reading
8th Apr 2019 12:24pm
8th Apr 2019 1:55pm
Beautifully sad, the melancholy and longing set the perfect mood for your emotional journey
8th Apr 2019 3:05pm
Thank you Tim,for appreciating, I did get someone on here to read first cause I wasn’t sure about it, they gave it the thumbs up
8th Apr 2019 2:56pm
8th Apr 2019 3:06pm
9th Apr 2019 1:08am
Heartbreak man, pure. This is a new way of putting it also. And everyone will feel this except her, I get that too. :-(
9th Apr 2019 1:10am
