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Your Lover
I'm your lover
an apprentice of attention held close
bonded and granted
wistful but deep
churning, in the never ending meld of you
patiently, I paint love notes
delicately upon your chest
a sculpture of beauty marks with style
handcrafted in a meaningful mix of indelible ink
solemnly I suckle the words
with endless duty and admiration
amid innumerable echoes of heart
beating, every second of every night
curves tantalize into hypnotic relaxation
bending to the pull of the moon
as those eyes keep calling me home
hungered, lips glisten in anticipation
breathless, awoken to air
without complication
none hesitation
amid precious moments
embracing, as we're finally set free
an apprentice of attention held close
bonded and granted
wistful but deep
churning, in the never ending meld of you
patiently, I paint love notes
delicately upon your chest
a sculpture of beauty marks with style
handcrafted in a meaningful mix of indelible ink
solemnly I suckle the words
with endless duty and admiration
amid innumerable echoes of heart
beating, every second of every night
curves tantalize into hypnotic relaxation
bending to the pull of the moon
as those eyes keep calling me home
hungered, lips glisten in anticipation
breathless, awoken to air
without complication
none hesitation
amid precious moments
embracing, as we're finally set free
Published 8th Apr 2019
Author's Note
Inspired after watching the film "Five Flights Up"
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8th Apr 2019 3:31pm
Haven't watch the film but it must be very good to have inspired this beautiful and tenderly romantic spill from you Tim.:-)
8th Apr 2019 3:34pm
Thank you Summer my dear friend, it's a look back at 40 years of love and how the little things matter as well as being there for one another in times of need.
8th Apr 2019 3:53pm
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Anonymous
8th Apr 2019 6:01pm
Whew...that's an intoxicatingly sensual write...
8th Apr 2019 6:16pm
8th Apr 2019 9:50pm
A great love poem, JusTim. My favorite lines:
curves tantalize into hypnotic relaxation
bending to the pull of the moon
as those eyes keep calling me home
Words to read and remember. May those eyes keep calling you home.
curves tantalize into hypnotic relaxation
bending to the pull of the moon
as those eyes keep calling me home
Words to read and remember. May those eyes keep calling you home.
8th Apr 2019 9:53pm
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