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losing your mind is like
a silent scream between two worlds
the reality you just left
and the one you find yourself in now
and being new here you
don't know the rules
and if you don't learn them quick
you end up another statistic
a silent scream between two worlds
the reality you just left
and the one you find yourself in now
and being new here you
don't know the rules
and if you don't learn them quick
you end up another statistic
Published 3rd Apr 2019
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4th Apr 2019 11:04am
Love this, a world of depth in relatively few words, and a little tinge of rhyme at the end that seems to tie it together. this clearly shows the divide between reality and the perceived reality in your head, and it feels like you're like trying to find a home in insanity rather than trying to escape from it or let it break you. Nicely done
4th Apr 2019 11:11am
