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Feeling Can't Pretend

With the waning moon I await
the clamor thru the cries
the wonders, the wheres, the why's

here fervor fuels the fair
in love that's disappeared
kindness ripples on
nothing lost, nothing won

breathe, please please, breathe

for light has failed the dawn
as night beeseeches day
darkness swooping in
still, life will begin again

but did it ever end

feelings can't pretend
the beats still live in me
it's real, not fantasy
Written by JusTim_
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Author's Note
Wrote this a little after leaving my ex. I was going thru old poems and reminiscing of how each made me feel
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