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I wish!!!

no longer young
no longer those days
no longer
long wishes

Over drink
in a tavern
we'd laugh
and

Yes.........

those were the days
and some of those days
belonged to us.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QptZ8tYZAkE

Written by Tallen

(earth_empath)

Published 26th Mar 2019

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Re. I wish!!!

Anonymous

26th Mar 2019 5:08pm

Fantastic, Tallen! The longing is palpable. Loved that last little stanza! Hit me in the heart.
Great job.
Matthew.

Tallen (earth_empath)

26th Mar 2019 5:15pm

thank You, Brother

the last stanza is
a truism i believe

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I wish!!!

cabcool

26th Mar 2019 6:46pm

Stanzas 1 and 2 are now and then; stanza 3 is then alone. Sounds like the "good old days" carry the greater sway, as they always do. This is a tight eclipse between the two eras, Tallen. Effective.

Sentimental sung version 1 (Hopkin): https://youtu.be/y3KEhWTnWvE
Sentimental sung version 2 (Bassey): https://youtu.be/hG4-QlBu7mw