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on the edge
off a windswept island's
rocky ledge
life
is best felt
on the edge
to live
is more than
mere survive
next to death's where
you're most alive
some say passion
some say thrill
i say pushing
own will
makes one go
atop the hill
stand on the edge
flare nostrills
take deep breath
living is real
ordinary life
steps
on treadmill
rocky ledge
life
is best felt
on the edge
to live
is more than
mere survive
next to death's where
you're most alive
some say passion
some say thrill
i say pushing
own will
makes one go
atop the hill
stand on the edge
flare nostrills
take deep breath
living is real
ordinary life
steps
on treadmill
Published 20th Mar 2019
| Edited 22nd Mar 2019
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20th Mar 2019 6:01pm
Yes, to exist, and not partake of life, is akin to being dead.
Totally agree, for the next opportunity may never come.
Very true, this!
Totally agree, for the next opportunity may never come.
Very true, this!
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
20th Mar 2019 11:23pm
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21st Mar 2019 2:10am
"next to death's where
you're most alive"
.....yes!
Thank you for this reminder.... I need to reawaken my inner thrill-seeker....
you're most alive"
.....yes!
Thank you for this reminder.... I need to reawaken my inner thrill-seeker....
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
21st Mar 2019 9:09am
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21st Mar 2019 2:03pm
21st Mar 2019 9:13pm
As Dylan Thomas said...don't go gently into...powerful poem CF.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2019 7:43am
i think... i think i might just need a little push off the ledge
routine has made me afraid to jump
an exhilarating write cold one,
can feel the rush before the plunge
routine has made me afraid to jump
an exhilarating write cold one,
can feel the rush before the plunge
24th Mar 2019 00:38am
