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I (Pt 4)
Walls
Nothing but walls
Unbroken dirty bricks
A far as the senses feel
Enclosed in a mental tomb
Thoughts echo
Bouncing off unyielding walls
It never cracks
A seamless prison
Nothing but walls
Unbroken dirty bricks
A far as the senses feel
Enclosed in a mental tomb
Thoughts echo
Bouncing off unyielding walls
It never cracks
A seamless prison
Published 20th Mar 2019
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20th Mar 2019 5:28am
Aspergers isn't something I have or know of many that have it
But certainly awesome Intellectuals are those that do
Respect to you Sir for being able to see & feel the world differently than most of us do
Sure, a little downside, but weigh that up against awesome intellect then maybe an acceptable passage
But certainly awesome Intellectuals are those that do
Respect to you Sir for being able to see & feel the world differently than most of us do
Sure, a little downside, but weigh that up against awesome intellect then maybe an acceptable passage
20th Mar 2019 5:32am
My self reflection pieces lately are ramblings that would normally be deleted for being incomplete but since I’ve been here I notice any size of poem is acceptable so I’ve decided to let the ramblings free
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20th Mar 2019 5:57am
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20th Mar 2019 6:04am
20th Mar 2019 7:54am
One letter or a million ... A write is a write ... And agree short ones can pack a much bigger wallop ... Bless and love ...
20th Mar 2019 7:58am
I’m finding my last few short ones do patch a wallop I think a few of my poems should have been shorter I kind of diluted them
20th Mar 2019 8:05am
You are the creator ... Be creative you long short or inbetween ... Doesn't really matter ... Bless and love ...
