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sick ..

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drunk gets on the bus �
and throws up �
what we really feel about �
ourselves �
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Written by dartford

(Paul S...)

Published 20th Mar 2019

#illness

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Re. sick ..

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20th Mar 2019 3:15am

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20th Mar 2019 7:31am

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Re. sick ..

20th Mar 2019 3:33pm

metaphorical indeed, Paul.

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Re. sick ..

20th Mar 2019 10:21pm

Being inebriated well and truly
does make some folks
more than a little perverse... stick a star on this one, Dart... Ely

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Re. sick ..

21st Mar 2019 3:45pm

oh, dear, how cynical of you.

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27th May 2019 9:07am

I love it... It's concise and spot on.
Powerful lines!

Delanee.

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