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and where a mother lies...
when a mother lies
do not dare
look into her eyes
she does
what she is
when a mother lies
to the side
nurturing life
there is heaven
delivering sustenance
when a mother lies
in the world's eye
what is missed
is the sight
that she couldn't bear
so do not dare
ask why
when a mother lies
closing her eyes
there lay
a child
a fairy
a princess
who once believed
in rainbows and unicorns
an angel to her own mother
a friend a sister a wife
but one role that becomes
her
is
mother
forever
and there lay
under her feet
the gateway
to heaven
we will never see it
for we are but heathen
failing to care
when she didn't lie
there..
do not dare
look into her eyes
she does
what she is
when a mother lies
to the side
nurturing life
there is heaven
delivering sustenance
when a mother lies
in the world's eye
what is missed
is the sight
that she couldn't bear
so do not dare
ask why
when a mother lies
closing her eyes
there lay
a child
a fairy
a princess
who once believed
in rainbows and unicorns
an angel to her own mother
a friend a sister a wife
but one role that becomes
her
is
mother
forever
and there lay
under her feet
the gateway
to heaven
we will never see it
for we are but heathen
failing to care
when she didn't lie
there..
Published 18th Mar 2019
Author's Note
A mother only knows why,where, when...
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18th Mar 2019 10:41am
19th Mar 2019 1:23pm
welcome
is the peer admired
welcome is the insight...
i believe the Autor's note refers....
is the peer admired
welcome is the insight...
i believe the Autor's note refers....
18th Mar 2019 11:52am
Great structure with this ... love the parallel stanzas with the same opening line ... carries the poem well ...
19th Mar 2019 1:22pm
welcome...
is the Poet Admired!
welcome
is the Friend
and the review, kind and generous!
humbled beyond words
dear poet!
is the Poet Admired!
welcome
is the Friend
and the review, kind and generous!
humbled beyond words
dear poet!
19th Mar 2019 11:59am
The ambiguities within your words are plausible, and guides one to deeper reflection.
Intellect,.. the only glaring truth in this piece.
Well done, my brother.
Intellect,.. the only glaring truth in this piece.
Well done, my brother.
19th Mar 2019 1:21pm
welcome
is the Wisdom Admired!
Welcome
is the PoetFriendSister!
:-)
well Sis way before i was ever born...you knew coz you ARE a Mother yourself!
observed My own Mum and the Moms i have come across my life... at all of the stages i have been through... what they do, the lengths they go to, for their loved ones, the extremes (well for the world those lengths might be extreme but i doubt they are for the Mother) they go to... to save their kids... hence
" she does
what she is"
only being what she knows...
a mother, naturally...so to look into her eyes is to judge her...
that was the S1
and the last stanza...well so many of my friends
unfortunately are at that stage...too late to appreciate those feet
no longer there...where lay the heaven
my attempt ...to say
as i see
honored
beyond word my Sis
just by your mere presence here...and the rest
well ...left me utterly humbled.
is the Wisdom Admired!
Welcome
is the PoetFriendSister!
:-)
well Sis way before i was ever born...you knew coz you ARE a Mother yourself!
observed My own Mum and the Moms i have come across my life... at all of the stages i have been through... what they do, the lengths they go to, for their loved ones, the extremes (well for the world those lengths might be extreme but i doubt they are for the Mother) they go to... to save their kids... hence
" she does
what she is"
only being what she knows...
a mother, naturally...so to look into her eyes is to judge her...
that was the S1
and the last stanza...well so many of my friends
unfortunately are at that stage...too late to appreciate those feet
no longer there...where lay the heaven
my attempt ...to say
as i see
honored
beyond word my Sis
just by your mere presence here...and the rest
well ...left me utterly humbled.
