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I See Her Beauty
Dawn awakens me with pursed lips
replicating yours still dancing in my dream
sunlight drapes my shoulders
as I envision you with that silky smile
hair cascading to and fro
in a look I long to know
I see pretty and eyes to behold
cheeks soft and sweet
and a face to bestow
and I feel you
I feel beauty
radiance reflecting your soul
it adorns me and warms me
rocks me gently
as winds lightly blow
it's kindness and kisses
giving the world a hello
it's sunshine through rainstorms
fires burning deep down below
desires in holding
a heart that's aglow
replicating yours still dancing in my dream
sunlight drapes my shoulders
as I envision you with that silky smile
hair cascading to and fro
in a look I long to know
I see pretty and eyes to behold
cheeks soft and sweet
and a face to bestow
and I feel you
I feel beauty
radiance reflecting your soul
it adorns me and warms me
rocks me gently
as winds lightly blow
it's kindness and kisses
giving the world a hello
it's sunshine through rainstorms
fires burning deep down below
desires in holding
a heart that's aglow
Published 14th Mar 2019
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- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
14th Mar 2019 10:09pm
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Anonymous
14th Mar 2019 11:41pm
Whoa...beautiful...
14th Mar 2019 11:42pm
14th Mar 2019 11:53pm
I see the beauty of these lines, how well composed they are. A wonderful love poem.
14th Mar 2019 11:54pm
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
15th Mar 2019 9:07am
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15th Mar 2019 9:31am
Anonymous
15th Mar 2019 10:03am
This poem flows beautifully Tim. They say that old saying...A picture paints a thousand words,” should read ..Words can paint a thousand pictures":)
15th Mar 2019 10:06am
Anonymous
15th Mar 2019 10:48am
If that's the case then you've got the real thing that's exactly what love is about..bringing out the best in each other:)
Anonymous
15th Mar 2019 11:26pm
reminds me of the fragrance of a beautiful flower - gets stronger and stronger, lingers always inside the most tender places
15th Mar 2019 11:31pm
That's a beautiful thing to say and I know you love fragrance, thanks Sophie...thoughts thru the soul of a dreamer <3
