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Another Casualty of My Stupidity
I’m sorry
no, I won’t say that
because you’re no charity case
from what I see
you have a talent I dream of
a draw like a magnet
I get shun like the plague
here and in life
have no family where I live
so when I say I have one love
that’s for the real
but from what I see
you are greatly loved in the underground
I understand
no, no one could understand
the shit you were given
I can’t even comprehend
doesn’t mean I don’t think your beautiful
down right adorable
fucking radiant at times
your support has been like the sun
without it I’m in the dark
ashamed?
yeah I’m ashamed
but not why you think
got confused
mad at what I thought was rejection
I don’t do too well with that
just ask Muse, Within, and Duende
bet they have some fantastic stories
been treated 2nt class all my life
though I’ll never know your pain
but I do know pain
sounds like we both could use a friend
I care
yeah, I will say I care
because I really do
not because of your disability
but because you cared for me
to me that’s a rarity
wish to say this isn’t the end
hope we both can join pins again
if not, I love you my friend
my prayers are with you
and so is my heart
no, I won’t say that
because you’re no charity case
from what I see
you have a talent I dream of
a draw like a magnet
I get shun like the plague
here and in life
have no family where I live
so when I say I have one love
that’s for the real
but from what I see
you are greatly loved in the underground
I understand
no, no one could understand
the shit you were given
I can’t even comprehend
doesn’t mean I don’t think your beautiful
down right adorable
fucking radiant at times
your support has been like the sun
without it I’m in the dark
ashamed?
yeah I’m ashamed
but not why you think
got confused
mad at what I thought was rejection
I don’t do too well with that
just ask Muse, Within, and Duende
bet they have some fantastic stories
been treated 2nt class all my life
though I’ll never know your pain
but I do know pain
sounds like we both could use a friend
I care
yeah, I will say I care
because I really do
not because of your disability
but because you cared for me
to me that’s a rarity
wish to say this isn’t the end
hope we both can join pins again
if not, I love you my friend
my prayers are with you
and so is my heart
Published 12th Mar 2019
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12th Mar 2019 6:53am
12th Mar 2019 12:00pm
12th Mar 2019 7:58am
Big be the heart when one can say sorry
Bigger when one can forgive in return
I'm sure you two will find beautiful common ground
Bigger when one can forgive in return
I'm sure you two will find beautiful common ground
12th Mar 2019 12:01pm
12th Mar 2019 8:28am
aw dearest DC this really touched my heart
you really got real and vulnerable here
I hope she hears your soul in this...
love you my friend...
Brenda 💕
you really got real and vulnerable here
I hope she hears your soul in this...
love you my friend...
Brenda 💕
12th Mar 2019 12:10pm
I don't really like getting too cheesy I guess, but I felt I needed to say this in a very real way. Because I don't want someone thinking something of me that isn't completely true. So I wrote all of what I was feeling to that person.
Thank you Crim. Always grateful for you.
Thank you Crim. Always grateful for you.
14th Mar 2019 2:39am
I'm sure she has just as much love & respect for you. I'm sure you made her cry by writing these beautiful thoughts & I bet there is no needs whatsoever for apologies. You have so much so soul shine..... It's what makes you a 1st class friend to me.
I made a mistake I had to apologize for, but honestly.....nothing you did is comparable to my fault. I was hurting because of her for two reasons..I knew her pain(I felt it) plus her thoughts about my God, the ones that are real & not fiction......
but I wasn't viewing it through His eyes. It's also a burden to me I led her in His direction but couldn't keep her there. It's me & unrealistic.
I made a mistake I had to apologize for, but honestly.....nothing you did is comparable to my fault. I was hurting because of her for two reasons..I knew her pain(I felt it) plus her thoughts about my God, the ones that are real & not fiction......
but I wasn't viewing it through His eyes. It's also a burden to me I led her in His direction but couldn't keep her there. It's me & unrealistic.
You touched me ( yeah I felt that) so I had to come back and comment once more. You're an awesome writer & person. I'm sorry you've been treated badly but I know that feeling too. I only have one love as well, neither of us have kids & we love animals..that makes us all the more soul friends I'm sure. I've always been drawn to your writing plus boys always get less attention.;) I'm probably not as loved now by everyone else..a lot to do with my Christianity...its not popular with poets;) but crims a badass & will feel the badass sinner ashamed in me, the same.....I know she will..its fucking crim!!!! Haha . 🖤
Anonymous
15th Mar 2019 8:09am
i love your approach to this one... there's an authenticity that only comes when writing from a place so real...
not much to say, this hits damn hard
straight to the list
not much to say, this hits damn hard
straight to the list
15th Mar 2019 8:51am
