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My Version of Hell
I stumble then I fall
drowning in the nostalgia
another victim of the times
getting sick of what’s crunked
everything has become so blah
where is Freddie’s passion?
where is Perry’s heart?
I want to hear a voice
that makes my emotions bleed
the airways justifie my means
shifted to a cold bitter blow
pushing the old off the edge
with such watered-down content
overcrowded with cocky pricks
representing my version of hell
wish to go back to the ways
the ways of the rocky road
working hard for what we got
take it all the fuck away
drown it in the mud
everything’s a fucking script
telling you where and when to stand
how you should emot properly
a time I thought I’d never see
if I could re-live the past
yeah, I would do it differently
this time I’d sing those songs
a little bit louder
drowning in the nostalgia
another victim of the times
getting sick of what’s crunked
everything has become so blah
where is Freddie’s passion?
where is Perry’s heart?
I want to hear a voice
that makes my emotions bleed
the airways justifie my means
shifted to a cold bitter blow
pushing the old off the edge
with such watered-down content
overcrowded with cocky pricks
representing my version of hell
wish to go back to the ways
the ways of the rocky road
working hard for what we got
take it all the fuck away
drown it in the mud
everything’s a fucking script
telling you where and when to stand
how you should emot properly
a time I thought I’d never see
if I could re-live the past
yeah, I would do it differently
this time I’d sing those songs
a little bit louder
Published 15th Mar 2019
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15th Mar 2019 6:23am
There's not a soul out there that doesn't look back to a time when music seemed more inventive no matter the era looked back upon
Though mine was in part the 70s I can imagine people thinking the same nostalgic views of later decades
Though mine was in part the 70s I can imagine people thinking the same nostalgic views of later decades
15th Mar 2019 8:47am
70s was a great time for music. Not that I was born yet lol, but love music from that time.
15th Mar 2019 9:26am
Oh it was spontaneous vivid explosive angst bliss
From mid eighties onwards it was crappy lol
Only my opinion
From mid eighties onwards it was crappy lol
Only my opinion
Hell yeah!!!
I love this write..we have so much in common..nostalgic souls..wishing for & living on that old stuff that was worth a shit. I live & breathe music. Mmmhm. Real voices, a real guitar, some drums..feed my soul.🎶🤘
I love this write..we have so much in common..nostalgic souls..wishing for & living on that old stuff that was worth a shit. I live & breathe music. Mmmhm. Real voices, a real guitar, some drums..feed my soul.🎶🤘
15th Mar 2019 9:03am
I love music a lot. I'm a person that has to have the volume just right. I like to feel all the emotions that were put into the song. I mostly like rock but I listen to all kinds of genres. Feed the soul.
I actually came up with this poem because my nephew wanted me to put some songs on his phone. To say the least I was disappointed in his music choices lol. Guess I'm officially too old.
I actually came up with this poem because my nephew wanted me to put some songs on his phone. To say the least I was disappointed in his music choices lol. Guess I'm officially too old.
15th Mar 2019 9:13am
Some Post Malone or something?🙄 They don't know real music. I'm the same way with the volume & I confess to 20 repeats sometimes if I'm feeling it.
15th Mar 2019 9:21am
When I was younger my mom used to get mad because I would have the same song on repeat for like hours lol.
It's much worse than Post Malone. Pitbull was one of them 🙄
It's much worse than Post Malone. Pitbull was one of them 🙄
15th Mar 2019 9:28am
I get fussed at too...
I have a great day. This girl's finally going to sleep!
I have a great day. This girl's finally going to sleep!
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23rd Apr 2019 4:43pm
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24th Apr 2019 5:02am
Mine and yours both 😁. Always nice to meet another music lover.
Thanks for reading.
Thanks for reading.
