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she knows just where
i keep my tears
for she’s my puppeteer
she finds out where
my heart bleeds most
and builds her fires there
she knows what words
with jagged edge
can make the sharpest wedge
between my safe place
and her chasm
and hangs me on the edge
i’m not unwise
to every smile
that paints her guile with charm
my own façade
would seem awhile
incapable of harm
but ere she bleeds
my tears like rain
or spills my blood in vain
the antidote:
to sip her dead
with venus’ champaign…
© Copyright 2019 March 11
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
http://mydo.cx/YzM1M2Zh
she knows just where
i keep my tears
for she’s my puppeteer
she finds out where
my heart bleeds most
and builds her fires there
she knows what words
with jagged edge
can make the sharpest wedge
between my safe place
and her chasm
and hangs me on the edge
i’m not unwise
to every smile
that paints her guile with charm
my own façade
would seem awhile
incapable of harm
but ere she bleeds
my tears like rain
or spills my blood in vain
the antidote:
to sip her dead
with venus’ champaign…
© Copyright 2019 March 11
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Published 11th Mar 2019
Author's Note
This is mere phantasy. At any rate, it speaks of the subtly controlled becoming the subtle controller.
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11th Mar 2019 11:49pm
I get these types of Fantasies
all the time.
I prefer not to be the controller but often I am thrust into the role and I do a crappy job and then.............
well You know........
nice spill, Brother
all the time.
I prefer not to be the controller but often I am thrust into the role and I do a crappy job and then.............
well You know........
nice spill, Brother
12th Mar 2019 00:10am
Thank you, Tallen.
Its nice to connect with your vast pool of experiences and musings. The controller/controllee proposition can become a vicious circle.
Does anyone win?
Its nice to connect with your vast pool of experiences and musings. The controller/controllee proposition can become a vicious circle.
Does anyone win?
12th Mar 2019 00:12am
In a true BDSM I'd say from experience, Yes
there are 2 winners.
In a vanilla relationship,
the lines are more blurred and often,
I'd say that no one wins when this happens.
there are 2 winners.
In a vanilla relationship,
the lines are more blurred and often,
I'd say that no one wins when this happens.
