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Exchange of Goods
wear that black dress with the skulls
it reminds me of how beautifully dark you are
any other day we can sit and talk
but today I’m thinking more like laying you down
flirt for awhile till we get down to some kissing
not everything needs to be forever
sometimes I just want to touch your curves
I see the way you sway those hips
you want something, and I do too
this could be an exchange of goods
maybe we can start with those red lips
sucking my tip till you work your way down
warm breath igniting the fire to my soul
running my fingers through that beautiful red hair
those hazel eyes are life changing bliss
but I’m gonna have to look away for a minute
lick open your slit and give that clit some attention
run my figures in and out to get the rivers flowing
today I rather push your legs over your head
thrust in back and forth with pent up frustration
flip you over for I can then hit it from the back
beat that pussy like it owes me money
then slap that ass around like it’s next
it reminds me of how beautifully dark you are
any other day we can sit and talk
but today I’m thinking more like laying you down
flirt for awhile till we get down to some kissing
not everything needs to be forever
sometimes I just want to touch your curves
I see the way you sway those hips
you want something, and I do too
this could be an exchange of goods
maybe we can start with those red lips
sucking my tip till you work your way down
warm breath igniting the fire to my soul
running my fingers through that beautiful red hair
those hazel eyes are life changing bliss
but I’m gonna have to look away for a minute
lick open your slit and give that clit some attention
run my figures in and out to get the rivers flowing
today I rather push your legs over your head
thrust in back and forth with pent up frustration
flip you over for I can then hit it from the back
beat that pussy like it owes me money
then slap that ass around like it’s next
Published 9th Mar 2019
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9th Mar 2019 7:29am
10th Mar 2019 6:13am
Quite appropriate when I'm in the giving mood lol. Thanks for reading, Rose.
Sensuously on-turning, as one reads the exchange of goods taking place in verse. Favourite lines:
maybe we can start with those red lips
sucking my tip till you work your way down
warm breath igniting the fire to my soul
running my fingers through that beautiful red hair
those hazel eyes are life changing bliss
but I’m gonna have to look away for a minute ….
maybe we can start with those red lips
sucking my tip till you work your way down
warm breath igniting the fire to my soul
running my fingers through that beautiful red hair
those hazel eyes are life changing bliss
but I’m gonna have to look away for a minute ….
10th Mar 2019 6:15am
Anonymous
9th Mar 2019 3:58pm
there is a time & place for subtle erotica that pussyfoots around & just hints at a raw fuck...
... this is not that time & place
i gotta agree with rose: those last two lines uhmm nailed it {no pun intended} lol
like a screen door in a hurricane 😋
smoking hot write
... this is not that time & place
i gotta agree with rose: those last two lines uhmm nailed it {no pun intended} lol
like a screen door in a hurricane 😋
smoking hot write
10th Mar 2019 6:19am
Sometimes I like a sweet erotic and sometimes I just want to write something raw. Glad this poem was enjoyable.
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23rd Apr 2019 4:45pm
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24th Apr 2019 5:05am
