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-the last rainbow (Shamieka)
she tastes like the last rainbow
to smile upon what’s left of me
as if the breadth of her being
alluded to flavors of fabled treasure
I’ve always dreamed I’d never find...
-ed
to smile upon what’s left of me
as if the breadth of her being
alluded to flavors of fabled treasure
I’ve always dreamed I’d never find...
-ed
Published 9th Mar 2019
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Anonymous
9th Mar 2019 7:12am
aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww
okay, squishy warm fuzzies girly feels aside...
.... eddie, you don't write often but man, when you do; hells fucking bells do you bloody write.
i love how utterly stripped back this is,
no need to hunt for the emotions between the layers ov metaphor
fine writing
okay, squishy warm fuzzies girly feels aside...
.... eddie, you don't write often but man, when you do; hells fucking bells do you bloody write.
i love how utterly stripped back this is,
no need to hunt for the emotions between the layers ov metaphor
fine writing
9th Mar 2019 8:47am
I really wasn’t happy with my last couple poems, but this one I liked. Except for the last line. Doesn’t close it out like I usually like. How it feels anyway
