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"I like it when you
read me again, closer"
my body says to you,
pretending it's a poem
SatInUGal
Written by SatInUGal (Kumar)
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Re. CLOSER
(Haley Quaquaversal)
23rd Feb 2019 11:57pm
Inches closer.
yelluw_always
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(Kumar)
24th Feb 2019 00:02am
Trust me, it gets better
SatInUGal
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(Haley Quaquaversal)
24th Feb 2019 4:08am
okay, now the distance is measured in atoms
yelluw_always
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Re: Re. CLOSER
(Kumar)
24th Feb 2019 4:14am
My eyes are closed and I can feel the air get thicker in the places you are near.
SatInUGal
Re. CLOSER
(k.)
24th Feb 2019 00:21am
This made me grin.
And then read it again....
And again....
:)  nice.
brokentitanium
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Re: Re. CLOSER
(Kumar)
24th Feb 2019 00:35am
Third time's the charm. Thank you for charming me.
SatInUGal

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