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The Screaming
Screams no longer human
ripped from her throat
Howls of unbearable pain
as he cuts and cuts
I watch
silently
against a pillar, tied tight
eyes tapped open to see
her slowly being sliced
from head to toe
blood flows copiously
I watch silently
this girl who used to be
so young and pretty
I just watch
and wait
for my turn, you see
she is next to me
The madman looks at me
Smiles and approaches
I scream too
ripped from her throat
Howls of unbearable pain
as he cuts and cuts
I watch
silently
against a pillar, tied tight
eyes tapped open to see
her slowly being sliced
from head to toe
blood flows copiously
I watch silently
this girl who used to be
so young and pretty
I just watch
and wait
for my turn, you see
she is next to me
The madman looks at me
Smiles and approaches
I scream too
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This poem...
21st Nov 2011 00:45am
..was entered for a competition in this portal. I wish to share it with you. Thank you for reading.
Damn
21st Nov 2011 1:21am
re: Damn
21st Nov 2011 1:29am
Thank you so much dear Vance, for your comments. You are very kind. Well, I nearly heard the screams when I wrote it...scary actually. I read and write in/from pictures in my mind, you see, so its scarier because I can see it. lol.
FOR HER A LESSON WELL LEARNED..
Anonymous
21st Nov 2011 4:42am
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re: FOR HER A LESSON WELL LEARNED..
21st Nov 2011 8:50am
Cool...
21st Nov 2011 8:27am
re: Cool...
21st Nov 2011 8:51am
Oh yes...Divine Idiong...it is a nightmare, yes? Imagine watching someone being cut up slowly...omg! well, it was a chiller poem competition...!!
re: OK
22nd Nov 2011 00:33am
waw
21st Nov 2011 6:52pm
re: waw
22nd Nov 2011 00:34am
Yes pixxel dear...hurts the eyes and ears to watch, but hurt to kingdom-come when felt...thanks for the comment.
Haunting
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Nov 2011 11:36am
23rd Nov 2011 11:32am
This is a haunting, scary piece that develops terror to the derivation of each nerve ending.
Well Written Grace.
Al-x-
Well Written Grace.
Al-x-
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re: Haunting
24th Nov 2011 1:25am
Oh yes AliP dear. Its painful alright. Even the words grate. ew!...thanks for commenting.:D so nice of you.