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Dimensions
I like to take in the scenery
sunlight bouncing off strawberry hair
perfect porcelain skin
and ocean eyes to complete the image
but vision has only one dimension
I want to know all your layers
deeper and deeper
when I say hi
that smile hits me so welcoming
we talk for hours about interest
reminding me of a time of innocence
it’s your loving nature I fall for
I could just sit and stare
watch your beauty all day
but that is so secondary
I crave more
with the wind blowing
the sun sinking
so does my heart
I don’t want to say goodbye
not even for one night
so I don’t
an answer from the Gods
I wake up the next morning
to you drooling on my pillow
makeup running down your face
and all I can think is
you’re still just as beautiful
sunlight bouncing off strawberry hair
perfect porcelain skin
and ocean eyes to complete the image
but vision has only one dimension
I want to know all your layers
deeper and deeper
when I say hi
that smile hits me so welcoming
we talk for hours about interest
reminding me of a time of innocence
it’s your loving nature I fall for
I could just sit and stare
watch your beauty all day
but that is so secondary
I crave more
with the wind blowing
the sun sinking
so does my heart
I don’t want to say goodbye
not even for one night
so I don’t
an answer from the Gods
I wake up the next morning
to you drooling on my pillow
makeup running down your face
and all I can think is
you’re still just as beautiful
Published 8th Feb 2019
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8th Feb 2019 4:06pm
Hi , love your work its a poem on woman's beauty and a man's love for her he would like take the scenery in which sunlight bounces of her strawberry hair here its a smiley of hair to strawberries, perfect porcelain skin smiley of her skin to porcelain and ocean eyes to complete the image, but his vision has one dimension that he wants to know all her layers deeper and deeper and when he says hi , that smile hits and is so welcoming they talk for hours about interest , reminds him of her loving nature which he fell for , he could just sit there and watch her beauty all day yet he craves for more with the wind blowing ,as sun sinks so does his heart moving time reminds him that he has to leave her but his heart doesn't want to say goodbye , an answer from Gods he stays with her wakes up next morning drooling to her ,makeup is running down her face yet she is as beautiful. This poem describes the beauty of a woman , her loving nature , and a man's love for her .
8th Feb 2019 4:22pm
Hi! Thanks so much for reading my work. You understood this poem well. Hit all marks of what it's about.
8th Feb 2019 4:50pm
This is such a sweet write, I really like it
it exudes affection and unconditional love -- awesome poem sir! ^-^
it exudes affection and unconditional love -- awesome poem sir! ^-^
10th Feb 2019 7:30am
13th Feb 2019 7:23am
Wow, DevilsChild! What a beautiful poem... The imagery was absolutely astounding! I loved it :)
13th Feb 2019 10:27pm
That's a wonderful complement. I'm glad I could write something you enjoyed.
