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Let me
Let me
lay you
on my bed,
ankles grasped,
legs spread.
Let my tongue
tickle and tease
this manicured
lawn,
mine to please
and pleasure.
Let me
bring forth
your glorious
flower.
Let me
treasure
your urging
sighs,
to galvanise
my endeavours
between your
thighs.
Let me
encourage
your rising
cries
as you
arc your body
hands clawing
silken sheet.
The sheen on
your body,
delicious heat,
with melding
hearts.
Breathless tension,
your hair slick
against a cheek.
I smile as I
demolish
your resistance.
Wetness now
flows
as you shudder
and subside.
Cover me with
kisses,
giggling at this
feeling inside;
self-conscious
of your loss of
control
of giving in
body and mind
to my
vernacular
this parlance
this tongue.
Let me
kiss your
very soul.
Let me.
lay you
on my bed,
ankles grasped,
legs spread.
Let my tongue
tickle and tease
this manicured
lawn,
mine to please
and pleasure.
Let me
bring forth
your glorious
flower.
Let me
treasure
your urging
sighs,
to galvanise
my endeavours
between your
thighs.
Let me
encourage
your rising
cries
as you
arc your body
hands clawing
silken sheet.
The sheen on
your body,
delicious heat,
with melding
hearts.
Breathless tension,
your hair slick
against a cheek.
I smile as I
demolish
your resistance.
Wetness now
flows
as you shudder
and subside.
Cover me with
kisses,
giggling at this
feeling inside;
self-conscious
of your loss of
control
of giving in
body and mind
to my
vernacular
this parlance
this tongue.
Let me
kiss your
very soul.
Let me.
Published 5th Feb 2019
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5th Feb 2019 2:56pm
"this manicured/lawn" ... nice ... great job with these line breaks and indentations ... creates such a great delay ... anticipation ... awesome flow with this poem ...
5th Feb 2019 4:00pm
5th Feb 2019 4:24pm
6th Feb 2019 7:47pm
Thank you dearest Brenda. A 'reflective write' when she is absent if only for one day. ~~(I like to think she will return more quickly if she reads about what awaits her return!) Dx
Anonymous
5th Feb 2019 6:17pm
Beautifully passionate. Loved this very much.
6th Feb 2019 7:49pm
Anonymous
6th Feb 2019 7:50pm
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5th Feb 2019 9:59pm
6th Feb 2019 7:58pm
Indeed! . There are occasions when 'The pen is mightier than the sword' …. sometimes only The Tongue will do :-)
18th Feb 2019 7:24pm
Let me
kiss your
very soul.
Let me.
What an intimate request. I hope the answer was yes!
kiss your
very soul.
Let me.
What an intimate request. I hope the answer was yes!
19th Feb 2019 10:16am
Thank you for your reading and commenting. The answer is, thankfully, invariably yes and my writing is usually her invitation and inducement to hurry on back to me! :-)
6th Mar 2019 6:50am
First..I love the word galvanize & use it too. Secondly, the ending was so damn sweet, I loved it but didn't expect it after the word demolish. Lol..great structure too!
6th Mar 2019 5:50pm
Thank you once again for your read and commenting.
I freely admit that without my muse my writing would wither and die.
She provides me with endless euphoric highs and some soul-searching lows with her various 'adventures'. But, as Brenda and I have spoken at length about …."We love who we love" ...
I freely admit that without my muse my writing would wither and die.
She provides me with endless euphoric highs and some soul-searching lows with her various 'adventures'. But, as Brenda and I have spoken at length about …."We love who we love" ...
6th Mar 2019 7:56pm
Great for you!! I go museless these days unless you're speaking spiritual muse.
7th Mar 2019 10:24am
She is a real person and no, while not always great (I do worry about her 'sexploits' when she goes away) it does mean I write from the heart … probably a little too much :)
7th Mar 2019 8:04pm
I understand. Investing in the people stopped @ 3 for me..it gets too deep and all ends up fleeting. May you stay blessed!!
