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Attraction (balancing act of your magnetic fields)
In our chemistry
I find the magnetic polarity
Of the we
Of you and me
I find the magnetic polarity
Of the we
Of you and me
Published 2nd Feb 2019
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2nd Feb 2019 8:46am
Hey Maenad,
I really loved this little poem! It's beautiful in its brevity :)
It's short, sweet, expressive, and creative, and I thought your usage of chemistry to express the attraction was very clever... nicely done!
Thanks for sharing!
I really loved this little poem! It's beautiful in its brevity :)
It's short, sweet, expressive, and creative, and I thought your usage of chemistry to express the attraction was very clever... nicely done!
Thanks for sharing!
13th Feb 2019 3:39am
