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APRIL 2018
We sat all night looking at the stars,
while the waves were almost catching up to our feet.
I fell in love with the way you spoke to me that night,
as if we knew each other our whole lives,
I felt so secure by your side i didn't want to leave it.
The beach was our thing,
The place we went,
To forget about everything.
You made me fall deep,
And when we have those times when we are broken up or no longer speaking,
i will forever think about our times at the beach,
where it was only you and me.
You were the sound of the shore,
The tingly feeling the sand would give me in-between my toes
and the seaweed that will get stuck while i was swimming.
while the waves were almost catching up to our feet.
I fell in love with the way you spoke to me that night,
as if we knew each other our whole lives,
I felt so secure by your side i didn't want to leave it.
The beach was our thing,
The place we went,
To forget about everything.
You made me fall deep,
And when we have those times when we are broken up or no longer speaking,
i will forever think about our times at the beach,
where it was only you and me.
You were the sound of the shore,
The tingly feeling the sand would give me in-between my toes
and the seaweed that will get stuck while i was swimming.
Published 1st Feb 2019
Author's Note
I wanted to write one good poem of my first boyfriend.
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1st Feb 2019 7:28pm
Very beautiful, I really like the last few lines and the metaphors between him, the sand and seaweed.
12th Feb 2020 5:51am
It's good but the last line lets it down a little with its switching of future & past tenths. Otherwise, yeah, has a lot going for it.
