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Valentine's Haiku
Burn these red roses
Each petal burning into
Black dust that dies off.
Fuck store bought chocolates
Lets rip these teddy bears to shreds
Not wasting money.
Another shitty
Valentine's day without love
Sigh let's sulk in it.
Here lies cupid a
Fake representational
That stands for this day.
Each petal burning into
Black dust that dies off.
Fuck store bought chocolates
Lets rip these teddy bears to shreds
Not wasting money.
Another shitty
Valentine's day without love
Sigh let's sulk in it.
Here lies cupid a
Fake representational
That stands for this day.
Published 31st Jan 2019
Author's Note
This is a Valentine's day haiku just having fun here.
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31st Jan 2019 4:50pm
Damn that little heart breaker. I'm totally onboard with ripping teddy bears apart.
31st Jan 2019 5:33pm
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- Edited 25th Nov 2023 11:45pm
10th Feb 2019 1:45am
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10th Feb 2019 3:27pm
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12th Feb 2019 2:40am
Lol, oh dear, it sounds a little grim, your Valentine Haiku. Maybe we can come up with something a little more optimistic, know what I'm sayin? ;-)
12th Feb 2019 3:25am
😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 yasss I wanted to put a bad twist to it. Don't worry our collab out Friday will be a little more optimistic, yet hilarious
Shhhh, don't tell anyone. I want to surprise them. But yes, it will be more optimistic but not by much, lol. ;-)
12th Feb 2019 6:36am
