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Sui Generis
Sui generis she is, and as I watched her,
my cruel amans, riding her salacious
pirouette of grace and sin,
I knew the esse of just one
finespun tear must be exquisite
upon the tongues of Gods.
I wept as the green river snatched away
the sky’s obsidian ink.
She's so arrogant when she wears black.
She tore me shut and I’m drenched
in this night, and in her
and I don't even know her name,
but she says she knows mine .....
and If my weary legs
might still carry the weight of my breath,
I will stand as she calls it.
my cruel amans, riding her salacious
pirouette of grace and sin,
I knew the esse of just one
finespun tear must be exquisite
upon the tongues of Gods.
I wept as the green river snatched away
the sky’s obsidian ink.
She's so arrogant when she wears black.
She tore me shut and I’m drenched
in this night, and in her
and I don't even know her name,
but she says she knows mine .....
and If my weary legs
might still carry the weight of my breath,
I will stand as she calls it.
Author's Note
(Artwork: Pavel Kiselev)
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Re. Sui Generis
30th Jan 2019 6:19am
The animal part of us wills us to survive - and survive we will.
Beautiful, Kas.
Beautiful, Kas.
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Re: Re. Sui Generis
Yes it does wise one, and even when we don't want to.
Your visits mean much and so does a spot on the list,
thank you for taking the time, as always...
Your visits mean much and so does a spot on the list,
thank you for taking the time, as always...
Re. Sui Generis
the vocabulary is awesome (saving a few words to my bank) and you write so honestly, i appreciate that. something i strive for. the heart rendered. <3 love it.
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Re: Re. Sui Generis
30th Jan 2019 10:38pm
I'm so glad you enjoyed, and thank you
for staying to comment.
I think the hunt for that perfect
word is one of my favorite pastimes ...
for staying to comment.
I think the hunt for that perfect
word is one of my favorite pastimes ...
Re. Sui Generis
16th Feb 2019 3:20am
Re. Sui Generis
18th Feb 2019 9:06pm
And If my weary legs
might still carry the weight of my breath,
I will stand as she calls it.
Goodness that's good stuff...
might still carry the weight of my breath,
I will stand as she calls it.
Goodness that's good stuff...
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Re: Re. Sui Generis
20th Feb 2019 2:07am
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Re: Re. Sui Generis
20th Mar 2019 2:32am
Very perceptive of you Timagination;
for them, about them, with them....
Maybe all of the above.
Your comment is the perfect example of why I
enjoy hearing other's thoughts and opinions. I just love the fact
that the same poem can be looked at from so many different angles
and provoke so many unique view points.
Thank you for adding just a little more depth with your kind comment...
for them, about them, with them....
Maybe all of the above.
Your comment is the perfect example of why I
enjoy hearing other's thoughts and opinions. I just love the fact
that the same poem can be looked at from so many different angles
and provoke so many unique view points.
Thank you for adding just a little more depth with your kind comment...
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
20th Mar 2019 1:22pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th May 2020 8:45pm
27th May 2019 3:04pm
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Re. Sui Generis
16th Dec 2019 5:41am
A wonderful piece. Very nicely done. i love to write as well so please check my site poemtheart i hope you like it :) thank you..
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2nd Jun 2022 8:23am
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21st Mar 2020 6:13am
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2nd Jun 2022 8:22am
Re. Sui Generis
25th Jan 2021 5:39pm
That's a Helluva a pull she has
That you would allow her voice to bring you forward on exhausted limbs
I can definitely feel the draw
I love ink that makes me feel
Thank you
That you would allow her voice to bring you forward on exhausted limbs
I can definitely feel the draw
I love ink that makes me feel
Thank you
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2nd Jun 2022 8:19am
Re. Sui Generis
Anonymous
14th Dec 2021 7:48pm
Great writing.
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Re. Sui Generis
Anonymous
- Edited 2nd Jun 2022 6:52am
2nd Jun 2022 6:51am
“I knew the esse of just one
finespun tear must be exquisite
upon the tongues of Gods.”
Phrases like this are what keep me interested in poetry,
this one phrase is better than whole poems I’ve written
finespun tear must be exquisite
upon the tongues of Gods.”
Phrases like this are what keep me interested in poetry,
this one phrase is better than whole poems I’ve written
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Re: Re. Sui Generis
2nd Jun 2022 8:17am
These are the things that inspire us to write
and that in itself is such a big compliment. Thank you for sharing it.
I enjoy the hunt for that perfect word
And the perfect place to put it.
I find myself searching words with similar meanings
for something that inspires me and build on it from there. It really helps me find new and more descriptive ways of saying things. You’ll get there, just keep writing and don’t make the mistake of thinking you’re not as good, it’s a learning experience!
and that in itself is such a big compliment. Thank you for sharing it.
I enjoy the hunt for that perfect word
And the perfect place to put it.
I find myself searching words with similar meanings
for something that inspires me and build on it from there. It really helps me find new and more descriptive ways of saying things. You’ll get there, just keep writing and don’t make the mistake of thinking you’re not as good, it’s a learning experience!