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Play Me My Song
He played to her the notes which would create his favorite song; the sweet propensity of her beating heart . Not only was her pulsing beat a sweet melody against his shoulder, he swore it also played a tune upon his thigh. The tranquil strokes of his ivory keys always lulled her soul as it also made her lust seep. She knew just how to dance her way into the beat of her own favorite song. She was but a hollow instrument without him, but together could they create her favorite song. Hers was more audible and with greater feeling; the propensity of his beating heart from the inside, his cock as the conduit.
Written by
PandoraUnleashed
Published 23rd Jan 2019
| Edited 2nd Apr 2019
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Re. Play Me My Song
23rd Jan 2019 6:09am
Although six stings on a piece of wood serves me but this is so perfect, so right. Enjoyed this one Miss Pandora : )
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23rd Jan 2019 6:16am
You and me both, I'm definitely a guitar girl myself. I love riffs and loathe the piano. Thanks for the lovely compliment and the gracious add, dear Stanhoven
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23rd Jan 2019 5:02pm
Used to tell my students the best thing about a guitar is it is easier to carry than a Piano lol.
"And you watch me playin' guitar and you feel what my fingers can do and you wish you were the one I was doing it to..." KISS
"And you watch me playin' guitar and you feel what my fingers can do and you wish you were the one I was doing it to..." KISS
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Re: Re. Play Me My Song
23rd Jan 2019 6:30pm
Now that's a pretty steamy idea when you put thought into it. Mmmm. There has to be so much truth to it as well!
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Re: Re. Play Me My Song
16th Mar 2019 6:08pm
Omg..you're too much. I hate the piano as I was forced to play so it was all picture & I hated this write...all impulse posted!! A gutair..ive been trying to write..mmm..those riffs;)
Re. Play Me My Song
23rd Jan 2019 6:13am
Romantic and sensual. Pic reinforces the proximity of the pianist's penis (almost a tongue twister here), also hinted in the line:
Not only was her pulsing beat a sweet melody against his shoulder, he swore it also played a tune upon his thigh.
Not only was her pulsing beat a sweet melody against his shoulder, he swore it also played a tune upon his thigh.
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Re: Re. Play Me My Song
23rd Jan 2019 7:11pm
The pianist's penis..that is a good play on words, my friend. Thank you so much, Solomon, as always. You're a gem!
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Re: Re. Play Me My Song
23rd Jan 2019 7:13pm
Thank you, Danny for such an amazing comment. So glad you could feel it. I'm humbled by your add as well. Hugs!
Re. Play Me My Song
Anonymous
23rd Jan 2019 1:41pm
This piece takes me to special place.... just going to say Thank You...
Amazing ink Miss Pandora
Amazing ink Miss Pandora
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Re: Re. Play Me My Song
23rd Jan 2019 7:15pm
Well thank you, Miss Soft_lilac. It's so good to see you and your lovely comment here. I'm completely gracious of your add. Hope you enjoyed that happy place, girlie;)
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Anonymous
23rd Jan 2019 4:43pm
Pandora,
That's really fantastic. You are honestly becoming a better writer each day.
Of course, music is just so incredible, and passionate, that the idea to unite that with the sensual aspect of the lovers was just brilliant.
Great writing, Pandora.
Love,
Matthew.
PS. I love the title. There's a Genesis song, called The Musical Box, and it's a fantastic song(from the Peter Gabriel days, and he says 'play me my song' in it a couple of times, so it made me even like it more, although I know it had nothing to do with your beautiful write...just a piece of useless trivia. Thank you for that though, now I have to listen to the song on my iTunes while I work.
That's really fantastic. You are honestly becoming a better writer each day.
Of course, music is just so incredible, and passionate, that the idea to unite that with the sensual aspect of the lovers was just brilliant.
Great writing, Pandora.
Love,
Matthew.
PS. I love the title. There's a Genesis song, called The Musical Box, and it's a fantastic song(from the Peter Gabriel days, and he says 'play me my song' in it a couple of times, so it made me even like it more, although I know it had nothing to do with your beautiful write...just a piece of useless trivia. Thank you for that though, now I have to listen to the song on my iTunes while I work.
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Re: Re. Play Me My Song
23rd Jan 2019 7:21pm
I love writing sensuality that's based on sweet music or caters like a religion. I'm so glad you see my growth and as always, uplift me. Funny enough, I love what most call useless knowledge. I'm sure I've heard the song but will check it out. I ❤ music too and much even write with it!
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Anonymous
23rd Jan 2019 7:45pm
You're so cool. Your writing gets better, and so do you as I talk to you more.
Let me know if you like the song. Last year, my brothers and I went to a band about an hour away, called The Musical Box, and they played all old Genesis(Peter Gabriel time), and it was phenomenal. They sounded exactly like them, and were incredible musicians. Fun stuff...you and the music talks.
Thanks Pandora!
Matthew.
Let me know if you like the song. Last year, my brothers and I went to a band about an hour away, called The Musical Box, and they played all old Genesis(Peter Gabriel time), and it was phenomenal. They sounded exactly like them, and were incredible musicians. Fun stuff...you and the music talks.
Thanks Pandora!
Matthew.
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