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When We Make Love
When we make love
We shut the world outside;
We're lost in our zone;
Not ashamed to groan or scream.
Our bodies intertwine in lust
As we exchange hearts and souls.
The longer we embrace,
The more our lust becomes bold.
When we make love it is not
"Making" but a natural flowing
From one to another.
We devour each other's body
From head to toe,
There is no orgasmic release
Until we are both READY to go;
We become total pleasure;
In the morning we have
Exchanged our hearts and souls;
Fused into an eternal oneness,
Thus, when we make love
We make love to ourselves
We shut the world outside;
We're lost in our zone;
Not ashamed to groan or scream.
Our bodies intertwine in lust
As we exchange hearts and souls.
The longer we embrace,
The more our lust becomes bold.
When we make love it is not
"Making" but a natural flowing
From one to another.
We devour each other's body
From head to toe,
There is no orgasmic release
Until we are both READY to go;
We become total pleasure;
In the morning we have
Exchanged our hearts and souls;
Fused into an eternal oneness,
Thus, when we make love
We make love to ourselves
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19th Jan 2019 5:57pm
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Re. When We Make Love
19th Jan 2019 7:10pm
A sensuous and very intimate poem. Nicely stated with sweet sentiments.....xo
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19th Jan 2019 11:34pm
Re. When We Make Love
19th Jan 2019 9:20pm
Echo Mysteria. Favourite lines:
We become total pleasure;
In the morning we have
Exchanged our hearts and souls;
Fused into an eternal oneness,
We become total pleasure;
In the morning we have
Exchanged our hearts and souls;
Fused into an eternal oneness,
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19th Jan 2019 11:35pm
Re. When We Make Love
20th Jan 2019 2:10am
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20th Jan 2019 7:56am
Good to see you Summerrain. Thank you for your read and compliment.😊💐
Wolfman🐺
Wolfman🐺
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20th Jan 2019 8:02am
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20th Jan 2019 8:21am
I'm very happy you are enjoying my ink. Again nice to see back dear.😊🌺
Thomas🐺💐
Thomas🐺💐
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20th Jan 2019 8:30am
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20th Jan 2019 8:34am
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20th Jan 2019 9:11am
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20th Jan 2019 9:18am
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20th Jan 2019 9:23am
The wolf always gets the blame...lol....well I'm very happy I make you so Summerrain...😉💐
Wolfman🐺
Wolfman🐺
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20th Jan 2019 9:40am
Sweet dreams Summerrain...🌹
Was very pleasurable conversations...😁💐
Wolfman🐺
Was very pleasurable conversations...😁💐
Wolfman🐺
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20th Jan 2019 9:43am