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Summer Semester, 1993
( Gee wiz )
I have noticed You
I truly have
But I don’t / do want you
It’s poor timing;
but I do / don’t want you
dark clouds – silver lining
Gee wiz.
Short of
over-aggressive being
I sense that I’m the quarry. . .
in class you came to sit by me
the start of a feely fairy tale.
Gee wiz.
You gave your # last night
told me your name, Liz;
I reciprocated in like
(I don’t / do want You)
Wow and Gee wiz.
Who is supposed to call first?
I do / don’t want You
I don’t / do want to
Young Beautiful Liz
aggressive, mysterious
Don’t / do want ----
Gee wiz.
I have noticed You
I truly have
But I don’t / do want you
It’s poor timing;
but I do / don’t want you
dark clouds – silver lining
Gee wiz.
Short of
over-aggressive being
I sense that I’m the quarry. . .
in class you came to sit by me
the start of a feely fairy tale.
Gee wiz.
You gave your # last night
told me your name, Liz;
I reciprocated in like
(I don’t / do want You)
Wow and Gee wiz.
Who is supposed to call first?
I do / don’t want You
I don’t / do want to
Young Beautiful Liz
aggressive, mysterious
Don’t / do want ----
Gee wiz.
Published 16th Jan 2019
Author's Note
Liz was 15 years younger but wanted something. . .
I don't kiss and tell and so don't ask.
I don't kiss and tell and so don't ask.
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I can sense the uncertainty and hesitancy but if u really like her then its usual for the man to make the first move. But I know men wNt some hint of being accepted so I liked your super cool poetry. Nicely expressed wow. Kudos.
Plz do review/comment my newest poem too,
Plz do review/comment my newest poem too,
16th Jan 2019 7:24am
During that time I grew into a
submissive life
and coming out -- so to speak -- was unsettling
and so I returned to college and met someone and
my submissive ways caused a new
new feel.
appreciate Your thoughtful share, here
submissive life
and coming out -- so to speak -- was unsettling
and so I returned to college and met someone and
my submissive ways caused a new
new feel.
appreciate Your thoughtful share, here
16th Jan 2019 5:17pm
Haha seems you wanted something too despite the hesitation...Did you?C'mon!Do tell!
Lovely ink.
Lovely ink.
LOL!
You caused me to chuckle -- thank You
all I will say is that it was a summer
fling in 1993
;)
You caused me to chuckle -- thank You
all I will say is that it was a summer
fling in 1993
;)
