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Dedication to a good friend of mine.

She begs for her life as I advance upon her.
She still has no idea I came to this place for the sole purpose of killing her.
She's pressed against the wall now, no more room to back away from me.
I slowly close the gap, knife outstretched, a homicidal grin spreading across my face.
She probably thinks I'm here to rape her. There is a noise.
I turn to the door and her mother is standing there, a scream of utter terror resonating from her open mouth like a siren.
She is quickly dispatched with a small cough from my silenced beretta.
As her already dead mother slumps to the ground, I tell my querry that the same fate awaits her, but in a much more gruesome manner.
She tries to scream, but I pull the gun on her and tell her to shutup or I will blow her brains out right there.
She whimpers, slides to the floor.
I gaze upon her face: snoting, crying, striken with mortal fear, agonizing grief at seeing her mother gunned down in an instant.
I step forward, she scrambles back up the wall.
The look on her face was almost enough to make me turn around and go home satisfied. Almost, but no cigar. I came here to kill the bitch and thats what I plan on doing.
I tell her that unfortunately, my face is the last thing she will ever lay her eyes on.
I'm standing directly in front of her now.
I rear back and slap her as hard as I can.
Then, without warning, I slash her left eye before she can recover.
She fell to the ground and grabbed her profusely bleeding face.
Then with another stab to the side of her head I took away the remainder of her sight.
Dispite my warning she screams like a banshee the entire time.
It's orgasmic.
I push her bed against the door. Now she can flounder around all she wants, there is no way out.
No one can hear her screams but the trees and I.
Certainly not the neighbors that live 2 miles away.
She's crawling now, begging me to stop.
I laugh. I haven't even started yet.
I walk over, purposely, knowing I have all the time in the world, and slowly push my weapon of choice deep into her side.
Her kidney I hope, but then, as long as she's in pain it doesn't really matter.
I turn her onto her back, pull up her shirt, and carve my name into her flawless body. She wails loud enough to wake the dead, she bucks and begs for mercy, but I'm stronger. I get on top of her straddling her body with my legs.
I strangle her, whilst simultaneously driving my knife into her neck, face, and chest. After 20 seconds she stops thrashing.
Then, I look at her body. I derobe and fuck whats left of her.
She insisted on having sex with so many others but never settled on me.
Now I've gotten what I wanted, even though I had to kill her to do it.
 And as one last humiliation, I cut slits into her asshole so it can accomodate me while i fuck her in the ass.
She is now my submissive bitch.
FUCK EVERY GIRL WHO HAS EVER SHUNNED ME.
Written by Deontejordan (D. Jordan)
Published | Edited 22nd Mar 2012
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