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speech iii (after agoraphobic nosebleed)
high on amyl nitrate and pussy fumes..
don't know which way is up..
don't know which way is up..
have no idea which way is perpedicular to the center of gravity..
couldn't care less..
couldn't care less..
as long as i empty as far back into her throat as i can drive this..
don't know which way is up..
don't know which way is up..
have no idea which way is perpedicular to the center of gravity..
couldn't care less..
couldn't care less..
as long as i empty as far back into her throat as i can drive this..
Published 31st Dec 2009
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Anonymous
15th Jan 2010 11:21pm
The repetition of the "don't know" and "couldn't care" lines was a very clever technique. Weather intentional or no, it also emphasises the sense of hopelessnes in this poem. The middle line is well-wrought and vaguely baroque. Weird and beautiful.
15th Jan 2010 11:35pm
well these are actually suppose to be lyrics so repeating lines is common in music to get a point driven in and add some breaks in the flow of the song.. vaguely baroque never thought of it that way but it is differently written than the rest of the poem
