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Withered feathers
as they traverse through the landscape
Together, build a home
Of uncertainty.
Nesting memories
in abstract bliss.
At dusk
In their own separate ways,
Retire into oblivion.
-SSM
as they traverse through the landscape
Together, build a home
Of uncertainty.
Nesting memories
in abstract bliss.
At dusk
In their own separate ways,
Retire into oblivion.
-SSM
Published 2nd Jan 2019
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2nd Jan 2019 6:43am
Certainly a place to rest my weary eyes, winging my way home... nice write. Peace....
3rd Jan 2019 7:32am
4th Jan 2019 3:28am
What a beautiful piece of poetry! You did a magnificent job. I love that you used birds to express your lovely story (I am a bird enthusiast, geeky, I know). Anyway, keep up the great work!
9th Jan 2019 7:05pm
7th Jan 2019 10:49pm
6th Dec 2024 9:29am
To me, this vivid poem mingles a sense of peacefulness with a little melancholy, generating a pleasant overall effect. The imagery is spot on, and I particularly enjoyed the ending. Thanks for sharing.
Mundus
Mundus
15th Dec 2024 6:15am
Reminds me of a couple I know, navigating this world as best they can. Only to come home, & unwind. No place like home.
