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Underskin
Emptiness held my mind and soul captive
In a whirlwind of bitter disappointment and sorrow
The Christmas cheer brought no warmth to my heart
The cracks quickly formed on my armor
Until the dam burst.
In a whirlwind of bitter disappointment and sorrow
The Christmas cheer brought no warmth to my heart
The cracks quickly formed on my armor
Until the dam burst.
Published 31st Dec 2018
Author's Note
Written for the "Short Expressionist Poetry on Christmas " competition.
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31st Dec 2018 11:16pm
Depression is unkind. I can relate to your feelings about but Christmas. I liked your poem... :)
31st Dec 2018 11:51pm
2nd Jan 2019 1:14am
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- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
2nd Jan 2019 10:38am
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