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Red Mud (2019)
The red wet dirt
found me slipping
from the jagged
cliff edge.
Earth created by my
desire to cling to
my past.
Metacarpals aching
as fingers bleed
trying to dig into the
sharp rock face.
I should let go.
This new year
will find me
letting go
&
I will find myself.
found me slipping
from the jagged
cliff edge.
Earth created by my
desire to cling to
my past.
Metacarpals aching
as fingers bleed
trying to dig into the
sharp rock face.
I should let go.
This new year
will find me
letting go
&
I will find myself.
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- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
31st Dec 2018 5:24pm
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31st Dec 2018 5:36pm
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31st Dec 2018 7:06pm
Re. Red Mud (2019)
Anonymous
31st Dec 2018 7:31pm
Fantastic, Tallen!
I was clinging to the cliff with you, my friend.
Really like that.
MZ.
I was clinging to the cliff with you, my friend.
Really like that.
MZ.
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Re: Re. Red Mud (2019)
31st Dec 2018 7:34pm
Hopefully You tethered Yourself to our lifeline
with stainless steel carabiners :)
with stainless steel carabiners :)
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2018 7:40pm
No, I just let go...but thanks.
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31st Dec 2018 7:41pm
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2018 7:46pm
I'm glad me falling to my death is a happy moment for you! LOL.
No problem, my friend.
MZ.
No problem, my friend.
MZ.
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31st Dec 2018 8:48pm
Re. Red Mud (2019)
1st Jan 2019 6:25am
Very nice, Tallen. It's not the letting go that hurts but the holding on!
You will be caught by the Universe.
You will be caught by the Universe.
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