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The Scent Of Her
The taste of her budding nectar
Sweeter in dawn’s early light
Her wetness is like morning dew
Her offering blanketing my face as a soft rain shower
Staining my tongue
Savoring the flavor of her milky pearl
Merging into my soul at sunrise
Sweeter in dawn’s early light
Her wetness is like morning dew
Her offering blanketing my face as a soft rain shower
Staining my tongue
Savoring the flavor of her milky pearl
Merging into my soul at sunrise
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18th Dec 2018 4:59am
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18th Dec 2018 5:13am
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18th Dec 2018 1:39pm
Her wetness is like morning dew
Her offering blanketing my face as a soft rain shower
Thank you Billy
Her offering blanketing my face as a soft rain shower
Thank you Billy
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18th Dec 2018 1:40pm
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18th Dec 2018 7:00am
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18th Dec 2018 4:13pm
I read you, Cocoa!
A simile compares two notions
Disparate, each one its own;
A metaphor is deep blue ocean
In which pale readers drown...
A simile compares two notions
Disparate, each one its own;
A metaphor is deep blue ocean
In which pale readers drown...
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18th Dec 2018 8:25pm
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You are welcome, Cocoa. My threefold goals were to: (a) agree with Solomon_Song, (b) respond to Billy_Snagg, and (c) affirm the brilliance of your post.
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18th Dec 2018 9:06pm
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Anonymous
19th Dec 2018 1:05am
The bliss of pleasure is such that the object/subject of pleasure has no importance. It's the beauty of the passion generated with the attributes describing the poetic scene that make the poem beautiful and a true celebration of eros in all its majestic and sensual reality. You are good my dear poetess. I will be keeping an eye on your poems to understand the deep, emotional spark from which they are born. J
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20th Dec 2018 1:35am
Thank you Juvenalis66. You had quite a lot of insightful things to say, which I am grateful
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20th Dec 2018 2:04pm
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20th Dec 2018 5:22pm
Thank you, Lyrically_Inclined for an in depth analogy of which scent you prefer, I'll left you in on a little secret, shh... so do I
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22nd Dec 2018 7:09am
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22nd Dec 2018 7:12am
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22nd Dec 2018 7:15am
Baby Im just as nasty and raw truth in my writes. Many people just can't handle them.
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11th Aug 2021 5:00pm