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Inside
In my minds eye still young and free
though this barbed wire bedecked wall
Wraps me up; contains my body
It's chains and shackles hang me tall
Outside my window the falling rain
In my minds eye still young and free
On a journey down lover's lane
Life outside my bars symmetry
Reflected sunlight my eyes see
Far off lands I once explor'd
In my minds eye still young and free
Happy memories; spent abroad
Here am I; Hanging by this chain
Heart slows; Nearly over? Maybe
Mistaken ID? All in vain?
In my minds eye still young and free
though this barbed wire bedecked wall
Wraps me up; contains my body
It's chains and shackles hang me tall
Outside my window the falling rain
In my minds eye still young and free
On a journey down lover's lane
Life outside my bars symmetry
Reflected sunlight my eyes see
Far off lands I once explor'd
In my minds eye still young and free
Happy memories; spent abroad
Here am I; Hanging by this chain
Heart slows; Nearly over? Maybe
Mistaken ID? All in vain?
In my minds eye still young and free
Published 14th Dec 2018
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- Edited 14th Dec 2018 4:45pm
14th Dec 2018 4:44pm
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14th Dec 2018 6:47pm
Gosh, thanks. It is a Quartern when the first line moves through BUT I'm not sure if this is right. Ask Jade-Pandora she does this stuff well.
14th Dec 2018 5:31pm
dearest Dawnraider smooth flow
it added so much to the emotion you are conveying
I could feel the downward spiraling of thought
I can relate to this feeling of being trapped...
bravo...
love Brenda ❤
it added so much to the emotion you are conveying
I could feel the downward spiraling of thought
I can relate to this feeling of being trapped...
bravo...
love Brenda ❤
14th Dec 2018 6:49pm
Anonymous
14th Dec 2018 6:19pm
Sad.
14th Dec 2018 6:55pm
Thank you for feeling my inspiration and mood. It is a desperately sad piece which you can take several ways. Incarceration, terminal illness or depression and suicide. Relax; none apply to me. :)
