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Sweet Red Wine
A glass of wine you say
Oh I know you want to play
WIne so sweet and crimson red
We drink before we go to bed
Letting that brew go to our heads
Wine so red and sweet
It is now our lips should meet
Watched my clothes fall to my feet
Then intwined we are to greet
In that tangled web we spun
The wine and night has finally won
Oh I know you want to play
WIne so sweet and crimson red
We drink before we go to bed
Letting that brew go to our heads
Wine so red and sweet
It is now our lips should meet
Watched my clothes fall to my feet
Then intwined we are to greet
In that tangled web we spun
The wine and night has finally won
Published 14th Dec 2018
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14th Dec 2018 9:07am
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14th Dec 2018 9:29am
Beautiful poem of red wine and love...very nice play of words rolling off your mind my dear...love it...🍷🌹😊🐺
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14th Dec 2018 6:07pm
I can picture the scene, soft lighting, cosy warm room, good company, excitement & a bit of anticipation...
BTW, I can also recommend a nice medium bodied merlot produced by 'Yellow Tail' very nice ;-)
BTW, I can also recommend a nice medium bodied merlot produced by 'Yellow Tail' very nice ;-)
15th Dec 2018 3:51am
10th Jan 2019 8:33am
Beautifully written, while not excessively erotic. I really like what you did with the ending verses, and thought it was very artistic using the web to describe your passionate embrace.
I enjoyed this very much and I think you're a great writer! Thanks so much for sharing, Selosa!
I enjoyed this very much and I think you're a great writer! Thanks so much for sharing, Selosa!
16th Jan 2019 1:59am
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