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Her evolution
She felt pain,
a pain that could not be soothed.
The pain turned to rage,
the rage burned deep. Into the deepest crevice of her soul.
The fire consumed her,
Her and the fire were one.
a pain that could not be soothed.
The pain turned to rage,
the rage burned deep. Into the deepest crevice of her soul.
The fire consumed her,
Her and the fire were one.
Published 8th Dec 2018
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8th Dec 2018 9:43am
8th Dec 2018 11:47am
It's like some post apocalyptic re-birth or Lord of the Rings Orc thing. Intense. Loved it.
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
8th Dec 2018 5:38pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
8th Dec 2018 6:03pm
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8th Dec 2018 9:53pm
Thanks for the feedback guys, the picture was perfect but i wrote it prior to seeing the picture,, so for you to understand the real feel it was removed :(
9th Dec 2018 5:55am
11th Dec 2018 1:47pm
