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express joy? how can one....
something
more than just
the feeling
sometimes beyond
expression
expression
fails
if one tries
using
the dimensions
of time
place
or space
'cause joy
is something beyond
all of that
yes
time
only represents
the period
one stays
there
the moments
spent
together
with that special
soul
joy
to me
is
l i f e
tasted
felt
l i v e d
in those moments
Published 28th Nov 2018
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
29th Nov 2018 00:02am
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29th Nov 2018 3:42am
29th Nov 2018 4:09am
i love your warm dramatic fusion of words, made me
smile because ...well because
so beautifully personalised
smile because ...well because
so beautifully personalised
29th Nov 2018 9:04am
Wow a unique original poem on the dimensions of love, so poetically rendered ahh. Beautiful poetry so charmingly expressed. Kudos.
Soo nice to read from your inking sir poet, Pleez do also review/add your thoughts under my newest poem too.
Soo nice to read from your inking sir poet, Pleez do also review/add your thoughts under my newest poem too.
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
1st Dec 2018 5:37am
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2nd Dec 2018 1:26am
Joy...so transitory, here one minute, gone the next, yet this happens only when we allow it. We can create it for ourselves, though this is the shortest lived. The most lasting is that which we are gifted by others and the joy we return.
Beautiful, this piece, here, you offer to others for their joy.
Beautiful, this piece, here, you offer to others for their joy.
6th Dec 2018 5:24pm
Sometimes my only expression of joy can be a contented sigh, how much is held in that brief moment of breath. And perhaps even more is expressed there than words could capture. Lovely delicate piece my friend!
