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Alpha ( I )
I used to go to bed knowing
I had a pair of arms waiting for
me at the end of the terminal.
I had a pair of eyes to look at
and a pair of cold hands waiting
to be warmed.
† to my Dearest 22/2/2010 & other Alpha
I had a pair of arms waiting for
me at the end of the terminal.
I had a pair of eyes to look at
and a pair of cold hands waiting
to be warmed.
† to my Dearest 22/2/2010 & other Alpha
Published 7th Nov 2011
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7th Nov 2011 12:30pm
7th Nov 2011 2:05pm
7th Nov 2011 4:56pm
And if Wordsworth is synonymous to nature, Jim Corbett to wildlife, then I mean you to be on the most elevated nature of consciousness in poetry which is human poetry, another dinity.
Anonymous
7th Nov 2011 6:02pm
Again you encapsulate so much sadness and longing in a couple of sentences. A wickedly effective poem. Thanks for the read, Ophelia.
7th Nov 2011 7:56pm
16th Nov 2011 6:26pm
you express your sentiments with much feeling and heart, Ophelia
always a pleasure to read.
shine on!
always a pleasure to read.
shine on!
