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An affair, friction, and hearts eaten as Georgia peaches.
She liked my nose and hated her smile,
I loved her everything.
fragments spewing of a familiar thought.
I left passion trapped,
ghosts in words confined walls
leaving none for myself.
a pilgrimage proved fruitless
once again.
I loved her everything.
fragments spewing of a familiar thought.
I left passion trapped,
ghosts in words confined walls
leaving none for myself.
a pilgrimage proved fruitless
once again.
Published 3rd Nov 2018
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3rd Nov 2018 9:15pm
Friction a little.
Affair, not from my side
And Georgia will never have my heart
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U crushed me by what you did for him.
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Just random comments from a distant memory
Affair, not from my side
And Georgia will never have my heart
.....
U crushed me by what you did for him.
....
Just random comments from a distant memory
3rd Nov 2018 9:37pm
4th Nov 2018 3:56am
"left passion trapped,
ghosts in words confined walls
leaving none for myself. "
A chill-worthy stanza...
ghosts in words confined walls
leaving none for myself. "
A chill-worthy stanza...
5th Nov 2018 3:12pm
Love the structure of this ... it so aids the flow ... great emoting/evoking ... there is a truth and gentle vulnerability as well ...
8th Nov 2018 2:46pm
