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Thee Wet of Life'n'Death
o'shit, damn, darn! whathfck I done did
n o w ?
my meticulosity punched gaping holes
in the thatchery
of me mindsoul house'roof..........allowing
m o r e
water run down
me freaky
old face that's
already chronic in weeping wild for the daughter who's
gone away, never
to
come
back......
never
to
come back......
(never'ever)
And so on.
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Published 29th Oct 2018
Author's Note
Ignorance is the doorway to stupidity in humanity that breeds mo'bigger ignorance in the name of Human Knowledge. It's TRUE. Y'can look it up.
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29th Oct 2018 9:03pm
I enjoy the way you slaughter the English language and conventional writing:
though the mess you've left
may cause some stress
the thought naught lost
to my nest now tossed
In all seriousness, the deluge of sewer water that pours upon us, float atop the salty brine of our tears, for that water will always be kept and felt deeper.
May solace and peace of mind be near.
Teri
though the mess you've left
may cause some stress
the thought naught lost
to my nest now tossed
In all seriousness, the deluge of sewer water that pours upon us, float atop the salty brine of our tears, for that water will always be kept and felt deeper.
May solace and peace of mind be near.
Teri
29th Oct 2018 10:33pm
I think ignorance and stupidity
are very different places
I can't possibly know how you feel
but to pretend that I do, now
that would be stupid ..
are very different places
I can't possibly know how you feel
but to pretend that I do, now
that would be stupid ..
