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Who The Fuck Is This?
Who the fuck is this?
Calling me three in the morn
Before the crack of dawn-standing on my front lawn
Who the fuck is this?
Talking shit on a cellular
Because hell is what-I’m gonna give ya
Who the fuck is this?
Now shooting at my home
While I’m on the phone-now it’s time to put two in their dome
Who the fuck is this?
Feeling how my nine click
Now in the dirt is his dick-while his draws is soiled in shit-
Nine in my hand, with house shoes on
To see who’s the motherfucka dead on my front lawn
Raining like hell and I’m getting fucking drenched
What I thought was a man was really a bitch
The same ho from the strip club
That I pimp-slapped, because she owed me a dub
Ignorant on anybody who don’t have my money
So in that situation you’re not my girl or my homie
The bitch wasn’t to educated
Going up against me-now she’s permanently devastated
Skull by the door, brains fertilizing the grass
Now the Grim Reaper is sickle-celling her ass
What a motherfuckin way to start my day
I hear sirens-so the police is on their way
Neighborhood in chaos-so fuck peace
Now I wish this drama would’ve stayed in the street. (Goddamn!!)
WHO THE FUCK IS THIS?
Calling me three in the morn
Before the crack of dawn-standing on my front lawn
Who the fuck is this?
Talking shit on a cellular
Because hell is what-I’m gonna give ya
Who the fuck is this?
Now shooting at my home
While I’m on the phone-now it’s time to put two in their dome
Who the fuck is this?
Feeling how my nine click
Now in the dirt is his dick-while his draws is soiled in shit-
Nine in my hand, with house shoes on
To see who’s the motherfucka dead on my front lawn
Raining like hell and I’m getting fucking drenched
What I thought was a man was really a bitch
The same ho from the strip club
That I pimp-slapped, because she owed me a dub
Ignorant on anybody who don’t have my money
So in that situation you’re not my girl or my homie
The bitch wasn’t to educated
Going up against me-now she’s permanently devastated
Skull by the door, brains fertilizing the grass
Now the Grim Reaper is sickle-celling her ass
What a motherfuckin way to start my day
I hear sirens-so the police is on their way
Neighborhood in chaos-so fuck peace
Now I wish this drama would’ve stayed in the street. (Goddamn!!)
WHO THE FUCK IS THIS?
Published 29th Oct 2018
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30th Oct 2018 2:30pm
Hmmm... interesting observation, Beholder... to which I might answer:
Guess that's what you get when you choose
to lose
by putting the not-so-bright-gun-in-your-hand
in order to make your answer... fool
That's when YOU should be caling...l
the fuckin' PO-LICE...
Guess that's what you get when you choose
to lose
by putting the not-so-bright-gun-in-your-hand
in order to make your answer... fool
That's when YOU should be caling...l
the fuckin' PO-LICE...
30th Oct 2018 5:11pm
The motherfuckin fool is the one who run up on me with a gun and who won't think I won't blast. Believe that. Thanks for the comment.
Oh, you're welcome, MrB...
a subject worthy of discussion...
too many of us forget that the
response to the response can be
another case of...
d-e-a-d-l-y
Something needs to change...
before our families
spend all their time
in the visitors' line...
the fuckin' prisons are overfull
there's got to be a better way.
a subject worthy of discussion...
too many of us forget that the
response to the response can be
another case of...
d-e-a-d-l-y
Something needs to change...
before our families
spend all their time
in the visitors' line...
the fuckin' prisons are overfull
there's got to be a better way.
30th Oct 2018 5:38pm
I feel you. Just because I do have a gun and a license to carry you still have to be smart.
30th Oct 2018 5:45pm
10th Nov 2018 3:49pm
Maaaan!!! It's been a while since I've
been inspired to leave a lengthy comment!!
I'm diggin this on a couple of levels
First
You're not talkin about some random street violence
You're takin about trespassing
This is 2nd amendment type shit here
...the right to bear arms and stand YOUR ground
and defend your family and your property
I totally get it
The cops can't respond in the moment shit is going down
That's what you're there for as protector and provider
Your got your licensed firearm for this specific reason
I'd be damn if I hesitate too!!
2nd
diggin the ode to Biggie's 'The Warning'
..haha!!!
One of my all time faves..
Much respect for this vibe!!!
been inspired to leave a lengthy comment!!
I'm diggin this on a couple of levels
First
You're not talkin about some random street violence
You're takin about trespassing
This is 2nd amendment type shit here
...the right to bear arms and stand YOUR ground
and defend your family and your property
I totally get it
The cops can't respond in the moment shit is going down
That's what you're there for as protector and provider
Your got your licensed firearm for this specific reason
I'd be damn if I hesitate too!!
2nd
diggin the ode to Biggie's 'The Warning'
..haha!!!
One of my all time faves..
Much respect for this vibe!!!
16th Nov 2018 5:48pm
Ole biggie did inspire me to write this and unfortunately I had to go through some bullshit like this. That's why I encourage if anybody do decide to carry a firearm then be smart. Get licensed and proper training. It will be a big help if you have to go to court. It was one of the factors that saved my ass.
17th Nov 2018 1:12am
17th Nov 2018 4:27am
I know right. Im the one who had to get out some good pussy to come get your ass.
1st Jan 2019 11:29pm
1st Jan 2019 1:40am
I tell you what, man. Keep hitting us with them rhymes and spare the violence. Fighting fire with fire never solved anything. But that's just my philosophy, no offense intended whatsoever, and a massive amount of respect to you for putting yourself out there and expressing yourself. There's are always people out there who will take advantage of anyone, and try to hurt you. I can tell you have a lot of build up anger inside, and poetry is a good outlet to release it You're awesome dude. Thanks for sharing.
1st Jan 2019 11:32pm
Thanks for the comment. And to let you know Im more calm than you know. People who trully know me say to calm.
1st Jan 2019 11:37pm
