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illusory
take a breath
feel what's real
cannot see it
do feel it
once expelled
no longer there
I never did own it
feel what's real
cannot see it
do feel it
once expelled
no longer there
I never did own it
Published 22nd Oct 2018
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26th Oct 2018 5:53am
You are quite welcome Ely lol
That was a longer poem ...
Then I just started taking more and more words out.. till only this was left. ..
That was a longer poem ...
Then I just started taking more and more words out.. till only this was left. ..
1st Nov 2018 5:34am
It's called paring down to the essentials,
all the way down to the gem in the middle... Ely
all the way down to the gem in the middle... Ely
