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Slapped
In the wake
Of your trifled
Height
Forwarding
Consummate
Ecstasy
Among other
Emptied
Pocket contents
Giving disadvantage
A hang over
From the
Accommodating
Indulgences
That flattered
My kitchen table
{The kitchen table
Flattered those
Accommodating
Indulgences}
(Without consent)
Like beads/No longer
Taking the breath
Out of your
Arrogant shape,
Wanting me
To do it for you-
Slapped.
#The shit #out of you
Of your trifled
Height
Forwarding
Consummate
Ecstasy
Among other
Emptied
Pocket contents
Giving disadvantage
A hang over
From the
Accommodating
Indulgences
That flattered
My kitchen table
{The kitchen table
Flattered those
Accommodating
Indulgences}
(Without consent)
Like beads/No longer
Taking the breath
Out of your
Arrogant shape,
Wanting me
To do it for you-
Slapped.
#The shit #out of you
Published 18th Oct 2018
| Edited 26th Oct 2018
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18th Oct 2018 6:44pm
"Like beads/No longer
Taking the breath
Out of your
Arrogant shape, "
I really love those lines. don't know how much more I can say but the way you put these pieces together always blows my mind.
Taking the breath
Out of your
Arrogant shape, "
I really love those lines. don't know how much more I can say but the way you put these pieces together always blows my mind.
18th Oct 2018 9:36pm
Thank you for the compliment. I have a 15 page scrub list that I pull entire pieces from; odd process.
Anonymous
27th Oct 2018 8:22am
Your poems read like crack of the whip. Succinct, each lines deliver with force. I salute. Rob
5th Nov 2018 2:44am
