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LITTLE OLD STORE
I'm open
Says the store
With bells on
Its door
But no one
Seems to notice
Anymore
Says the store
With bells on
Its door
But no one
Seems to notice
Anymore
Published 14th Oct 2018
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14th Oct 2018 3:52pm
Awww....I always frefer the old ma and pa store to the big chains. Poor little stores...they get starved out nowadays. There is one in my neighbourhood that I always go to. It feels like the store I used to go to as a kid with my great grandma. I love the place. Nice personification poem...it touched me sadly.
14th Oct 2018 4:19pm
In moments of self-pity (a feeling I do not recommend) I feel like this store.
14th Oct 2018 4:36pm
Yeah, it's a great metaphor. Hey...let me drop in for some groceries and some toilet paper.....; )
14th Oct 2018 4:45pm
There's a housemade fudge station too for you to check out. We try to keep to the classics, but there's a couple new flavors we're trying out. I think one may have passionfruit. Buy five little pieces get the sixth free.
14th Oct 2018 6:10pm
14th Oct 2018 8:01pm
Wow now that's an analogy. From 0 to 100 in 7 small powerful lines that say a lot about how you feel it: aging. Clever
14th Oct 2018 8:05pm
